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No Please Stop

I sit within the little bit
of light hearing those voices
raised yelling at each other.
I can't tell what it is they are
yelling about is it me am I
the one that causes their wrath?

Darkened hallways is what I see
out side of this room beside
me all alone in the little bit
of light filtering in I am afraid
that they will come after me next
will I be their scapegoats
will they come in to beat me
with their loud voices
and cruel hands.

If I stay curled into
this little ball will they see
me will they hurt me? Them with
their loud voices and hard hands
will they come will they hurt me
once again? May be if I stay very
still they will not see me here.

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  • Laura
    March 5, 2007

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    i didnt think it was different love i thought it was very powerful and certainly rememberable well written its a credit to you
    laura xxxxxx


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 1, 2007

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    Hmmmm this is intresting and different. it fascinates me how many types of different poems you get frm one small picture i really liked it thanx and gd luck