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Mom series 2

                                I miss you
                            I miss your hugs,
                              I also miss your jokes
                        I know your not died
                              but I really miss you
                        I know I can't live with you
                                  I hope you feel better somday
                      We can go shopping again
                            I have your hair
                                Your smarts
                            and when I look in the miror
                                  I cry.
                          I wish you were here
                        Life is not as fun without you
                              I miss you
                                and I still shed a tear
                              everday.
                                  I hope your ok.       

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  • Inverted Illusions
    October 25, 2007
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    wow

    all i can say is oh my gosh this is so sweet and painfull at the same time........


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    March 3, 2007

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    beautifully written water! I am so sorry you cant spend time with your mother I hope you feel better soon! Still good job on the poem


    -Steve-


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 1, 2007

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    this is a wonderful poem and i know it was hard to write, i wish i knew what to say, but even i think at this time it is best to just be quiet and say keep it flowing