I'm sorry if I ever hurt you.
You know that I would rather die.
I'm sorry if I make you mad.
Even more-so if I make you cry.
I'm sorry that I can't be perfect,
for that's what you truly deserve.
I'm sorry that I seem so clingy
by putting my heart out on reserve.
I'm sorry for the stupid
and insulting things I say.
I'm sorry if I seem heartless.
Please know I'm not really that way.
I'm sorry if I disappoint you.
You are so very much greater.
I'm sorry that I'm writing this.
I know I will regret it later.
Author notes
Amaze me
A contest entry
- Unbearable Silences by xkhiemster.
300 points, ended March 17, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Amaze me by Sam-I-Am.
450 points, ended March 23, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything && Everything (Shoot me up side the head) --all ages-- by Marilyn..
475 points, ended August 11, 2007, 58 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This reminds me strongly of a friend of mine that given the chance, would most likely express himself the same way. I liked the rhyme scheme, a very wel done, and good luck.
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this is a very powerful work, bringing up emotions almost anyone can relate to. the way you describe such complicated emotions so simply is fantastic. however, i dont see how this relates to the subject of my contest. even so, i like this poem a lot.
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i like this a lot..it always seems that we're saying sorry for something or other...but i really like this a lot because i'm always doing the same thing..regreting something i said later on and wishing i could take it back..but anyways love this piece it's very well written..keep it up!
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I almost made mistakes in my life of leaving this girl...never did though. but, I am sorry that you feel this way. hopefully things will get better.
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Thanks much.
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good write
i've felt the same way, kinda. had to break up with a girl, few months ago, the hurt lasted almost months, even though our relationship did not last long anyway.
that's life though.
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Thanks.. glad it has some meaning.
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This is very good...although I can't imagine you hurting anyone or making them mad or saying stupid and insulting things or dissappionting someone...And definately you could never be heartless...So just Excellent poetry....right?
Whyitt U xoxox
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fuckin A, this is awesome. very much so what alot of folks feel. dont despair, alot of us are, or have been there with you . great write, the poem itself was awesome, the message and feeling great. welly penned!
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Thanks again.. and again.. tears..
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