Behind closed doors
Lies a secret in my heart
Behind closed doors
Lies a pain that sets me apart
Behind closed doors
My true feelings are subdued
A fake smile on my face
No one has the slightest clue
Behind closed doors
A pain most unbearable
A longing and an aversion
Love described as incomparable
Behind closed doors
A heart no longer whole
Into a million pieces
Shattered faith and broken soul
Behind closed doors
After all you've put me through
I wish I could take my love back
I wish I could hate you
Author notes
1) Tell me about being heart broken, how much it hurts, make me feel your emotions
Love Sucks... truly, it does.
A contest entry
- Pre Write Contest by SensualWhispers.
615 points, ended March 15, 2007, 100 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pain. by AngelEyes13.
300 points, ended March 7, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Stunning
........................ The emotions rolled through this poem and really hit hard with me you've done a fantastic job thanks for entering the contets and the best of luck to you. kassie -
Amen! I like this poem. ALthough you did not put love bites in the author box...love sucks is okay. I'll let it slide since it;s such a good poem.
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Love doesn't suck... It just really really...sucks... Umm... Not helping am I? Well, just remember that things must get better eventually. I feel personally feel that the last stanza didn't really end the poem well, but I guess that's just me. Wonderful write! ^_^
Hell Angel
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Really? I thought the last stanza summed it up pretty well... any suggestions?
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