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Midnight Secrets

Midnight secrets,
Behind closed doors.
Pillow fights,
Tickle contests.
Shush don't tell,
Hide Mom's coming.
Under the blankets,
Giggles escaping.
Scary stories,
Comforting hugs.
Mean words,
Merciless teasing.
A backup,
A best friend.
Club house for two,
Keep out.
Teddy bears,
Baby dolls.
Snuggled together,
Comfy and warm.
Reflections of moments,
In each other's eyes.
Silly,
Enchanting.
Earnest,
Just love.
Always there,
Together come what may.
Sisters,
Friends.
Whispering,
Midnight secrets.

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Sugah Bear - Sister

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  • Dead Hair
    June 14, 2007
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    Oh I love this poem, this is a lot like the relationship I share with my actual sister. I like how you put 'mean words' and 'merciless teasing' in to show it's not always smiles. Thanks for putting the required things in your author's notes, saves me loads of trouble!


  • EmeraldDreams
    April 20, 2007

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    I always wanted a sister or brother when I was little!This sums up perfectly what I would have loved......its an adorable piece. Thankyou for the entry.


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    March 1, 2007
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    Oh naother delightful piece. I never grew up with a sister close to me so I missed much of this.