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Love

Love is when you spend hours talking about anything.

Love is when you could watch t.v. without thinking there is something wrong.

Love is when you could be on the phone without the awkward silence.
Love is when you are fine as long as you are with them.

Love is when you say something and it doesn't come out right, but they know what you were saying.

Love is when holding their hand is more important than kissing.

Love is when every bad day vanishes when they start to talk.

Love is when tickle torture becomes something you look forward to.

Love is when you get butterflies in your stomach, just by thinking about them.

Love is when pain is the farthest thing from your mind.

Love is when all their flaws decrease the more you get to know them.

Love is when you feel like they are the only person who sees you.

Love is just a word, until backed up by action.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 2, 2008

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    So much deeply stated piece with a touch of the beauty in it......I love it..and my thanks for sharing it...well done..


    • insane172
      August 2, 2008
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      Your very welcome.

      I am glad you love it. I hope others feel the same. And thank you for reading.

      XD


  • Titus gold member
    August 1, 2008

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    I'll agree with that last line, it all builds up to trust and the eventual decline derides one way of the other by that small measure. Sadly, it all depends on two working as one to reward us in what we are looking for,.

    • insane172
      August 2, 2008
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      Thanks

      I am glad you grasped my point. I am curious why you say that it is sadly based on two people working as one???
      Why is that sad?

  • justiena
    March 7, 2007
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    good job

    i really like this poem. its so real. great job


    • insane172
      March 10, 2007
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      tHANK yOU

      I am in love so I wrote this to prove that it wasnt just a cruah...

  • justiena
    March 7, 2007
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    this poem is so real. good job.


  • insane172
    March 1, 2007
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    Thanks both of you...

    I am super excited that you guys liked it...


  • Stellar Circuits
    March 1, 2007
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    Can't argue with any of that. Wonderfully written. 'nuff Said.


  • Jeneralix
    February 28, 2007
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    Awww...this is soo sweet. Not to mention the comic, actually I was looking at that on the site like 40 mins. ago. lol. but this is a great poem and the guy you love must love you just as much. Great job!

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