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A Letter for you.

Have you heard the story
of the eyes that cut through me
like a broken promise

That I'll never believe.
not even inside of me.
It's too hard to see
Because how much he means to me.

and yet, I STILL can't see
the broken glass,
underneath my feet

the driven tears
falling into the ashes of a
long...
forgotten

used and bought
life I once sought

Longing for love...

every smile I've ever seen.
every breath that I'll ever need.

I wonder, have our hearts ever agreed?

"[I think] I should give up.
and label you, hopeless
because that sums it all up

Everything I ever wished
sealed like a package
with just one kiss

So, I'll staple my heart to a piece of paper
crumble it up and throw it away
before I make you regret another day."

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I'm not usually the type to rhyme, so...=\

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  • Wasteofpaint1
    August 8, 2007
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    I always loved this one it is awesome!


  • My Broken Blade
    June 19, 2007

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    Wow, I liked this poem a lot. Its means something to me. Check out some of my poems, well keep on writing


  • Emotional-wreck
    June 10, 2007

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    every smile I've ever seen.
    every breath that I'll ever need.

    I wonder, have our hearts ever agreed?

    That part was classic...loveddd it!
    =]
    Great poem dudeeeee!