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Find Yourself Alone

Existence is a solitary condition
Ponder it with partners and only endings
will spring forth when your minds meld
Only stop signs will appear to guide you
and all answers will be circular in form

Seek the answers to inner questions alone however
and the long entombed truths of wise men
will drift down to you like light fog
and the wisdoms that Solomon took for granted
will become as blood in your veins, irreplaceable

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  • Corvidae
    March 7, 2007

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    Well done!

    Congratulations on your well deserved gold!
    I think this piece fits the picture very well. it was dreamy and thought provoking!
    Thank you!
    ~Corvidae


  • Vernal
    March 1, 2007

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    This is wonderful my dear. The first line especially caught my attention. 'Tis a great attempt at what she was thinking in the picture. Definitely one of my favorites in the contest.