Why did you leave?
What made you change your love to hate
Why did you leave?
Leaving me with naught but to grieve
Wonder why I deserve this fate
Tell me now, please don't hesitate
Why did you leave?
In a list
A contest entry
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Comments
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I love poems with repetition.
I thouroughly enjoyed this piece.
I don't believe though, that if you ever truely love someone that you can hate them, it's just imposible, when you love someone no matter what they do or say, they will always have a small piece of the heart they broke to carry around with them, that's why your heart can never be fully mended.
Thanks a lot for the entry, i hope you enjoyed writing it as much as i did reading, xx -
See, there are many why's, and still no answers! If only we had the ability to see into each others minds and hearts. Then at least we may know why pertaining to love. Thanks for this entry. Good luck. Jeannie
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