Oh, oh, the table keeps turning
Mind, mind, how it keeps churning
yearning to learn the meaning
deserving to be a being.
Oh, oh, these people are waiting
mind, mind, how it is fading
wading through the plague
making what still can be made.
Please tell me what you think
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actually, I thought it was kinda sucky.... I need to post some of the poetry I write at school and stuff. It's way better.
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actually, I thought it was kinda sucky.... I need to post some of the poetry I write at school and stuff. It's way better.
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This. Was. Awesome. I always love your poetry! I swear it gets better and better with every poem! And I can't write a single decent poem now... What's up with me? WOAH HYPER!! I especially love this line, "wading through the plague" I don't know why, it just sounds really awesome and I swear you could win any poem contest you entered as long as all of the words in your poem were real words (hehe) and you followed all of the rules. Maybe you could get away with those things. I am so jealous! Darn you! I spite you! "A plague on both your houses!" Sorry, I'm reading Romeo and Juliet and I absolutely love it. It's so funny. OK I'm gonna go I love you I'm hyper again bye!
;fCarrie
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