Why must I write in letters and words?
Why dont we whistle and hum like birds?
Why isnt poetry all that we speak?
Why is it always the strong, not the weak?
What is a question?
Who can tell our wrongs from rights?
Who will show us blacks from whites?
Who has come to save the day?
Why is my future fading away?
Why more questions?
The answer here is poem and song
All of our strengths, rights, and wrongs
All we have held in colors and days
As now our questions are fading away
Everything and nothing... Because
A contest entry
- A Quickie Contest....Ends SOON by JeannieD Hunter.
450 points, ended February 28, 2007, 20 entries
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Comments
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Very nicely written, the only comment I'd have is remove the word always in Line 4, it seems like you're trying to force an extra word and I think it would be more smooth without it. Other than that, purely stunning write, keep it up Gooch x
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I like this!! Don't know why..
but I do. I tell our neice and nephew, Because! when they ask why, when all they want is to understand. Thanks for this entry. Good luck. Jeannie
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Very nice.. you got me thinking with this one!
Great write!!
Angie
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