Why?
I ask myself.
Why do I tolerate the pain of a loveless marriage,
why do I stand here and cry,
why dont I run to a better place.
Why?
I ask you,
why do you stay when you hate me,
why do you stand here and torment us?
Why dont you leave my son and I alone?
Why, mommy?
Mychild asks,
Why do you and daddy fight all the time?
Why arent you happy?
Why do we stay?
A contest entry
- A Quickie Contest....Ends SOON by JeannieD Hunter.
450 points, ended February 28, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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oh dear. hits a bit close to home, this one...
we all have our long stories, i suppose.
i dont know what else to say on this one, except that you write it well, and writing this must have taken a lot of sterength. i know it would have for me. best wishes. -
Yup, all we can do is just ask why!! I was so hoping you held the key! Bet you do too. Thanks for this entry. Good luck. Jeannie
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WOAH....
Isn't it painful when you realize that your CHILD realizes that your marriage is falling apart???
WOW...
You penned this to perfection...
Good luck in the contest...
Heidi -
*sigh* Me, too.
I love you.





