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Why?

Why?
I ask myself.
Why do I tolerate the pain of a loveless marriage,
why do I stand here and cry,
why dont I run to a better place.

Why?
I ask you,
why do you stay when you hate me,
why do you stand here and torment us?
Why dont you leave my son and I alone?

Why, mommy?
Mychild asks,
Why do you and daddy fight all the time?
Why arent you happy?
Why do we stay?

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  • infinite spirit
    April 17, 2007
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    oh dear. hits a bit close to home, this one...
    we all have our long stories, i suppose.
    i dont know what else to say on this one, except that you write it well, and writing this must have taken a lot of sterength. i know it would have for me. best wishes.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    February 28, 2007

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    Yup, all we can do is just ask why!! I was so hoping you held the key! Bet you do too. Thanks for this entry. Good luck. Jeannie


  • Sacrificial Love
    February 28, 2007

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    WOAH....

    Isn't it painful when you realize that your CHILD realizes that your marriage is falling apart???

    WOW...

    You penned this to perfection...

    Good luck in the contest...

    Heidi

  • Sam-a-nantha
    February 28, 2007
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    *sigh* Me, too. I love you.