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"Teenage Years"

    TEENAGE YEARS
Teenage years we have all been there
Popularity contest at school,no understanding at home
Worring about those things would be a luxury here
My life is a little different as says in the poem

At 16 you start dating and driving
At 16 i see no women,and my ar is on my weight pile
At 16 looking at 7 years i was crying
At 16 you might of looked at 7 days grounded only for awhile

At 17 you start your first relatioship
At 17 i star to understand prison rules because i have seen
At 17 all i can do is watch my back and never slip
At 17 you see summer around the corner,and for vacation you fiend

At 18 you start your last year of high scholl
At 18 i see freedom coming so near
At 18 i look back and see i was a fool
At 18 you see graduation less then a quarter of a year

Just a little look at the difference we have had
Just a couple of months ill play cetch up and see
Just like you i can worry about home and at school be mad.
Just a little while ill be there for my family

Youll be judged because of the clothes you wear
Ill be judged for my background
Your still will change in the years thats for sure
Ill still be looked down upon cause ive been around

        "Ill make it thats for sure"


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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 1, 2007

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    The end of the poem in the last stanza really sums up your poem and the picture together and i like the way you did this. thnx and gd luck


  • Angierie
    February 28, 2007
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    Very nice.. I like the way you set this up.

    Great write!!

    Angie