Do you do this to me
on purpose?
Are you trying to drown
me in my own tears?
You leave no evidence
of your existence
in Forks
Yet you have left an
impression upon my
memory, it will not
go away
the only concrete thing
you leave behind
is a stupid old radio
for my car, which I
scornfully took
out
I have tried to
become friends
again, but it will
not work
They ignore me,
apparently I've spent
too much time
with you
Where are you?
Are you like me?
Like a zombie - lifeless?
Do you feel like you
have died?
Do you even still love me?
Yes, I suppose you
do, but not in the
same way as I do
to you
I try to act
natural, but so
many things
remind me of
you
Why did you leave me?
Author notes
Based off New Moon, Twilight's sequel. From Bella's POV.
Option 2.
Beneath the Willow
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i love this poem this is about the best i have seen
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wow a beautiful poem, this would go well in my contest, have a look if you want.
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This is the angry side of Bella, which is a really interesting POV. I like this, reminds me of when I read the book. I was so angry at Edward but by the end of it I felt for him, and this reminds me of the emotions I went throguh reading this book.
Well done, good job.
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this is the part in the book, that i always cry about, even though ive read it like 4 times, still so sad. wonderful write!
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Awwww! I love this but I hate it. If that makes sense. I own the whole series and re-read them a lot. but I also skip the end of New Moon when Alice shows up... Generally I skip even farther than that. It's so sweet. It was really choppy, but in a poetic way. Like Bella really wrote it. Great job!
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I loved it. it made me go through the entire book in my head which is kind of wierd when you think about it because not the entire book is about her seperation from edward but anyway it was awesome
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I liked this poem. It is really beautiful. And i haven't even read Twilight or New Moon! I'll get to it eventually. lol Good Job
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This is def. a good poem and very emotional. I love it! Great job!
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