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Old Wise Dumb one : Ode to Cranky

Dear old Cranky,
You have had a long life,
Sad to see you go,
but No More Suffering for you,
But yet you Live on in our hearts,

Old Duggie is what we called you at times,
your real name is
Cranky the golden Child,
Child you were at heart old boy.
The way you Chased those little critters up the trees

I remmeder those hot summer days where I would sit on the swing
And you would Join me and I would tell you of my day,
You would listen to all my troubles,
and in your own way of understanding you would lick my face.

Plus you made a Great Dance Partner even when there was no music playing.
And How you loved when we scratched your eyes and the sound you made when we did.
You made us laugh when you chased Merlyn my cat up the Tree
Poor Merlyn you made him turn around on the tree and his furr stand on end.

And also when you ran into the garden hoe and Broke it.
Old wise Dumb one, you had and IQ less than a Jar of Mayonnaise.
You are in our memories forever.
But it was Wrong of those people to Posion you!
they toke away our lovable old Dog!
We will Miss you,
Old Wise Dumb one.

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#3 Write an ode to your favourite animal (again, the funnier the better)

This Poem is a Dedication to and old dear friend, Cranky The Golden Child ,Funny name for a dog but I didn't name him, He was my Grandfather's dog, Poor old Cranky was Posioned by Heartless People!! I hate those Kind of People, Cranky was a Lovable old Dog that wouldn't hurt a Fly , Cranky was a good listener when I would sit on the swing he would join me and lay right next to me, and I would tell him about my day, and my problems, then in his own way of showing he understood he would lick my hands and my face. sometimes old duggie as we called him sometimes would jump on us and nearly knock ya down but once he had you down he would lick you in the face. Crazy old Cranky. He will be sorly missed......

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  • anoetic poet
    April 24, 2007

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    Awww... How cruel of those people to poison a lovable dog!
    But his memories will live on forever I'm sure. Thanks for entering and good luck!


  • tawk gold member
    March 1, 2007

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    Wow what heartless people to had poosioned an innocent dog. I can feel your pain and I am so sorry that this happened!!!!!


  • Nereida Nightshade
    February 28, 2007

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    Awww...I can't believe he died. Not cranky the oversized teddy bear. I can't stand some people!!! He will indeed be missed.