I recall a sob,
torrential and
"endless"
longing for your gentle, hourglass fingertips
to pick the salt from its earthless reflection.
But in time
I was calmed by the inconsistency of the trees' windless-sway,
and slowly I turned from your stoic, static hush,
my eyes
to the heavens.
And now I'm caught white-handed in the snow,
swaying to a mysterious song in the cold amber of foggy trees.
A rumbling, a thunderous growl
grows from the bellies of the children
who have not yet satiated their zealous hunger
for the taste of skylight.
I sense the soul is undulating, my sweet friend.
And as I stare down at myself in puddles of rain-shade,
I recall childhood dreams of strangefruit,
and the feel of cold grass
against the napes of necks.
Finally,
I understand that your fingerprint swirls
where mine loops
(and why you could never join me here inside the trees).
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Original style
This poem has an intrigue and enchantment about it, an abstract yet nostalgic feel to it also making it an enjoyable read. Well done. -
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Thanks for the kind words.
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