Rosado - el color de experiencia de comedor perfecta.
Author notes
Please do not use my name in any comment - I'll get the sack.
Lo siento - Tortia is easier to spell than Tortilla - Soy perezoso - (I am lazy)
A contest entry
- Help me finish the project that's in my head. by bird at rose.
450 points, ended April 25, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The creativity mattered even more than the cute language to me
Hello now,
You have an interesting name here, but do I suppose that you used a common misspell with "Tortia?" Because, I've seen that spelling all over web sites, but not in the Spanish nor English dictionary. Do you know if it is an Americanized version of 'Tortilla?'
A true mini mistake you made involves what I had requested to be put in the author notes in one of my rules, since you put that in the brief preview instead. So, I ask you to please copy it over to the author comments box, and other than dealing with my spell-check wonders, then you're all done with editing!
Back to explaining why your name is good -- It has a ring to it. You are probably thinking that most customers for her will predict that a Mexican restaurant is going to have that call of bread on the menu. True, Pink most likely will make some of good ground wheat or corn tortillas, and yet, that isn't going to be her only thing on the list. That's ok because I'm not insulting you, that is actually a compliment for the likelihood!
Your one line written inside the entry, I think I can understand without having to go to the Spanish dictionary at all {I still need more practice}, although I did get minimal help from my mamma. That was very sweet, I promise to tell Pink what you said soon, LOL! You brought uniqueness to your congratulations to her with, "el color de experiencia." Ooh, nobody else says that according to what I've heard in my decade of life. Most would just talk about the food being hot, but I proclaim that you went further, just like I wanted. One way I read it after viewing the whole verse instead of just half is that the good food there without any bad food mixed is what the employees will cook and create skill with. The other is the flawless as could be food at the time of her research, which she will serve kindly, is going to be remembered in a strong, hot way. I like what I got out of yours!
My criteria was followed all the way, does that add an extra smile on the outside of your teeth?
Thank you for entering, and even though I ask you to not reply or rate my comment as this is anonymous, writing something up for me in the author notes is more than fine with me if you want to as you already need to go put something else in there! I will come back to this to see if yours is perfect with my rules and if you told me anything in your author notes. Thanks again.
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Spelled out Daisy.
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