I Love You Mum !!!
You fill my tum ...
...When I am hungry
You are so much fun...
...When I am bored
You smack my bum...
...When I am naughty
You buy me some gum...
...When I am good
I Love You Mum !!!
Author notes
for my mum ..i love you mum ...mum dont realy smack my bum but if fitted in the poem n made me gigle when i write it ... loves you mum xxxxx
A contest entry
- mothers day by honey bear.
600 points, ended March 13, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 23 of 23
-
hi every1
-
Just had to pop my head in and see what a little chimp gets up to
You sure do have lotsa friends Rich and this is a great poem for your mum
Leaves you with a friend to play with (he loves flies)
Take care of each other hon.
Linda
-
-
love the frog thank you Linda x chimp x
-
-
Aww this is so sweet. I'm sure both of your mums here will love it.
-
-
thank you x chimp x
-
-
thank you for entering and good luck in the contest with this sweet write,this made me laugh too
ha ha ha
-
-
thank you mummy x chimp x
-
-
Beautifully saisd for a son's Mother!!!!
I really enjoyed your thoughts with this one!!!! You keep getting better all the time writing your words thru the awsime power of poetry!!!! Take care richard!!
-BriaN.
-
-
thankyou brian i love me mum she is the best xx -chimp- xx
-
-
Ah, Rich, this is a lovely dedication to your Mum, I bet she loved it!!
Loved the little picture too!!
aunty spider
-
-
thankyou aunty spider i choose that pix coz mum need a stick to walk in the house -chimp-x
-
-
Well done
Great poem for your Mum Rich, and I'll bet it cheered her up. You sound like a very caring son. Well done and good luck. From ya mum's 'Long Lost Twin'
-
-
thank you aunty twin hope it ok to call you aunty -chimp-x
-
-
Aww this is great Rich She sure is a wonderful mum and friend to me.
Bood luck in this contest!
Grannie G xxxxx
Gaylene
-
-
thank you Grannie G mum has lots of friend on here i happy i get to know them all x -chimp-x
-
-
beautiful
Awww Rich, you are so sweet to your mother. What a fine dedication to her. I'm sure she fully appreciates this. I hope you two have a wonderful Mother's Day. Keep on loving and caring about her always. After all, you're everything to her. She loves you more than anything. God bless.
Brian -
-
thankyou brian i love mum as well i always will -chimp-x
-
-
Awww this is such a sweet poem. I can't see her spanking you either!! She is such a sweet person. Embrace her and love her. My mom passed away last month, so this will be first one without her. Great write sweetie.
Jeannie
-
-
thankyou Jeanie
i am sorry you mum has die 
my mum nerly die it was sad in the hosptil but i glad her got beter i wood have miss her so much -chimp- a and a for you x
-
-
awwwwww rich fanx u son this is butiful i love you sooooooo sooooooo much ...it makes me cry reading it but laff at the same time i love the lil rhymes u used you are gettin real good at poems im so proud of you xxxxxx mum xxxxxxxx
-
-
thank you mum i glad you like it coz i love you you is the best mum in the world and you is mine xxxxxxxxxxx rich xxxxxxxxx
-
-
very nice dedication to your mum, i know she love this as much as i do. good luck n the contest.
uncle John
-
-
thankyou uncle john xx -rich- xx
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 23 of 23
