As i step off this ledge
into imeasurable uncertainty
into the unknown and uncharted
I am afraid, I am doubtful, I am scared
Lord be my vision in this darkness
be my guide on this journey
be the wind in my sails
across this sea so full of peril
strengthen me Lord...
remove my doubt, make me certain
remove my fear, make me bold
remove my weakness, make me strong
fit me with your armor Lord
secure me in my faith
be my light, my joy, my strengh
protect me, love me,
save me...
Author notes
wrote this ages ago when facing a big decision in my life
just found it tucked away in an old book so thought
i might just as well post it
whatever
Comments
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wow
i canrt find any better way of saying what the comment below says, this is really a fantastically written peice, so powerfull wow!!
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Profound
What a powerful piece of writing; it was mellow with an underlying strength to it. Your use of repetition reinforced the feelings 'I am afraid, I am doubtful, I am scared ', allowing the reader to become more in tune with your emotion with every beat. Your imagery 'be the wind in my sails
across this sea so full of peril'
really helped me to take in your situation in my head. A most well-written piece; I could definitely relate to it, and it has given me strength, so thank you for that.
Extremely well done
xx
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