Fairy Wings
Dragon Scales
Protect our child
Let her grow big
Happy and true
Gods above
Winds around
Evil do not
Touch this ground
Round and Round
The magick is there
To watch over us
And all the love we share
Author notes
I wrote this for a friend and her unborn child.
A contest entry
- A Moment in Forever by Nephlim.
600 points, ended June 16, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ruuuules, please. Or do I whack thee with my royal judge stick of 'Duhness'? Oh, because I will
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I love children, and I'm happy about the emotion of hope and prayer that you put in here, different from the other poems about love of another kind. I just don't see the 'moment', nothing physical. I wanted physical almost as much as emotional, to really paint the picture. But it's fine! Good luck ^-^
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Aww thats cute!
I like this it's short lined but it gets the message across good!
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great!
I love this piece, though one typo *Gods
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I did not see that! Thanks sis!
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