YOU STUPID STUPID STUPID!
I WISH YOU WERE GONE!
HOW DARE YOU!
YOU STUPID!
YOU STUPID, INNGNORENT, LITTLE THING!
HOW DARE YOU, HOW DARE YOU....
steal my heart....
A contest entry
- Anything and everything !! ( a truthwriter's contest ) by sweethelper.
300 points, ended April 22, 2007, 145 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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This is a very emotional filled poem with lots of anger. Wonderful job and good luck.
~Angel~ -
THis is a very angry poem you penned here, showing much anger, well written dear poet
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i thought it was just one of your angry poems but i love at the end when you said "steal my heart", very poetic i really like it....keep it up
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very angry but at the end i like where it says "steal my heart"
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wow pretty angery... but great congrats
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angry but good
Wow! Quite an angry write if I do say so myself. Is this a true story? True or not it's good you can let your feelings out like this. Some people have an easier time saying it verbally, others do it better writing. Keep up the good work. In spite of this poem's angry sentiment, it pleases me you're being honest . . . not only with this person but with yourself as well. Thanks for sharing it.
Brian -
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Stupid!
thanks a lot of people have been saying its alittle bit 2 angry but im glad you like it!
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