I breathe in deep the scent of your skin
My senses go crazy and I’m lost within
This little world I’ve created around
The two of us--then without a sound
You move away out of my grasp
A tube of lipstick in your clasp
You touch it gently to your lips
I drink you in, in little sips
You stand and turn and give me a look
And know my thoughts just like a book
You beckon to me with a longing gaze
I’m trying to move but I’m in a daze
You move in close and take my hand
The dinner tonight that I had planned
Is tossed aside like my shirt on the floor
What you have in mind is so much more
You hold me tight, I see what you want
I try to pull back to give you a taunt
But there’s no holding out, I know this by now
I’m yours and you know it, I just don’t know how
I could ever have gotten a woman like you
Such grace and beauty, a heart that’s true
To love such a man as I think I am
You can see more in me than I know I can
So I give in to you with love unrestrained
And all my devotion without refrain
In my little world, you’re the best part
In my little world, you have my heart.
A contest entry
- ...love... by Miss Faith.
600 points, ended February 25, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Suzyque needs to know...Is Love Alive....Show me...Past Present, Future by SuZyCuE.
900 points, ended December 11, 2008, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful
Just wanted to say congrats on winning the gold in my contest, your poem flowed so nicely and was simply beautiful, and gave me hope that true love is alive and well at least somplace. -
AWWW! This was wonderful! Truly lovely, thank you so much for entering!
"So I give in to you with love unrestrained
And all my devotion without refrain
In my little world, you’re the best part
In my little world, you have my heart."
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A very loving and beautiful piece. I can relate to this a lot, love is truly wonderful, when it is true and real. Your rhyming and meter were both really good.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
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Aww... gave me goosebumps!! That so unbelievably romantic!!
Every woman would want such a piece penned about her!!
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well u really did do a fab job and i sure will!!! x
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I wanted this poem to be my contest winner!!!! i posted it wrong
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Don't worry...I understand, being your first contest.
I'm glad you liked it that much. Maybe you could IM me for your next contest and I can see if I have anything that might fit.
Thanks, Sweetie...Michael
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exactly the type of things i was going for! absolutly loved it!!! very powerful and some of them lines were just pulling me in
"You touch it gently to your lips
I drink you in, in little sips"
thank you for entering my contest, great pen work and good luck! wouldn't mind reading somemore of your writes could you tell me your all poetry name?? as everyone to me is anonymous! -
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Thank you!!
That's most kind of you.
My AP name is Michael Bell.
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Whoever she is, she's a lucky girl. A terrific poem of love without the slush.
Thanks for sharing....Sue
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wow
great job u r a talented writer good luck thankyou very much for entering -
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Thank you! You are very kind.
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