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- Hearsay -

Missing image

The air of Angels from Northern lights
danced around Spirit’s song
whilst he traveled Time searching
for hands to turn back minutes
so her face could be caressed~
one more stroke.

                   Against his bosom,  she slept
                   without worry of today or tomorrow.



He came back from battle, unharmed
though tales were told otherwise.
Hearsay stopped her Heart
from singing.

Tears trickled through walls,  reverberated
into saturated soil which could be heard faintly~
as one treads up the steep staircase,
a lover’s anguished apparition still waits.



 

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  • Puppydog gold member
    March 10, 2007
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    LOVELY !

    A lovely story you have written here my dear friend, a true joy to read.


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    February 28, 2007

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    Beautiful piece, I loved the story in this and it is what I thought of when I first saw the castle ruins. Thnak you for this very fine entry. Bunny


  • penman gold member
    February 28, 2007
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    Whew!

    Beautiful darling. Really fantastic write. Good luck in the contest.