Today is my birthday. It started quite wonderful.
Then a tall dark man made it quite plunderful.
I ran to my room for the safety of my door.
As I was hiding I heard him torturing my parents on the floor.
I now sit in a corner holding myself tight.
Hoping to safe myself from his horrible fright.
I saw the doorknob move, and bounce.
He then crept in ready to pounce.
I screamed in fear for my life.
Has he slowly approached me with is knife.
I prayed to god to keep me protected.
But then my body was dissected.
A contest entry
- Sadness and pain by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
370 points, ended March 7, 2007, 15 entries
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Comments
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Umm.......dark and menstrual(yes menstrual as in your time of the month) but very good i liked it
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This was very good and i think that you used the picture really well to right a poem so powerful that you feel for sorry for the child. however i think it is save and not safe
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