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the limerick

There once was a limerick I wrote
While I was at work on a boat.
The rhyme meter and words
Were somewhat absurd
But the comedy kept us afloat.

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Just in a randome mood

A contest entry

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  • Janice M Pickett
    April 10, 2007
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    hehehehehe

    LOVE it. This is not only funny, but really good. Excellent job.
    Hug
    Jan


  • nilav
    February 28, 2007
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    very interesting indeed...


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    February 28, 2007

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    Very cute indeed. I like that way you penned a limerick on a limerick also. Thanks for this entry and good luck.
    Gaylene


  • ScarletO gold member
    February 28, 2007
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    Humor keeps me a float quite often.. Very nicely done!


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    February 28, 2007

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    Oh!!! A limerick on a limerick Very cool! Loved the rhymes, imagery and assonance. L5 sums up so well what limericks must must have!!!

    All the best,
    Charishma

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