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No Grin And Bare It

A young fellow whose name was Zip
Every day he did skinny dip
Someone stole his clothes
Except for his hose
Walk home an embarrassing trip

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  • Sai Babas Lotus
    February 28, 2007

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    Ohhhh.....poor fellow! Very expressive imagery. Good assonance and alliteration. Nice rhymes too.

    All the best,
    Charishma


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    February 28, 2007

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    Oh dear what images this brings to mind ! A very creative and funny write.I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for your entry and good lucl.
    Gaylene