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I would Like

I would like to see
The way you feel.
I would like to touch
Your dreams, and understand
Your mind.
I would like to know you
As I know laughter.
I would like to be with you,
And smile.



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  • Kevin Moderators member
    September 26, 2007
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    lovely and simple piece, I enjoyed it!


  • lovingwife
    March 2, 2007
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    it is a very simple poem but youjget your point across! good write


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    March 1, 2007
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    I hope you get to. Thanks for this entry.