There once was a boy called Lee
Who loved his cuppa tea
Was asked, one lump or two?
Now lying unconscious, that's new
It was the mallet, he failed to see
A contest entry
- Limericks #4 by AliceinPoetryLand.
300 points, ended February 28, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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hahaha... I feel like a dork! I had to read it twice to get it. I was thinking !what! i dont get it lol. but I do now. This is a really cute write. It was well written. Good job ♥
Best of blessings,
dance in the rain -
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Hehehe
thanks
Don't feel so bad, I've got a strange sense of humour sometimes
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LOL!!!!!!!!!
I had to read that twice to get it.. which makes me feel even dorkier.. but... lol! I giggled at this.. like a little kid.. it is SO hard to make me laugh in a poem. and for some reason this was just cute enough to do it.
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You have a gift for words my sister
. From start to finish you have a spell over the reader. Just amazing! And the title "One lump or two " at the end, wow. Haha, good luck in the contest!
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hee hee hee
This is too cute for words! I will be picturing this scene in my head as I trudge through my day. Thank you for the giggle. Good luck in the contest. 
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OH, I see the mallet gives one a lump or two. LOL
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Oh dear! This is hilarious!! Loved it..beautiful imagery, lovely rhymes and good moment captured here. Excellent twist in L5!
All the best,
Charishma
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Oh my, poor Lee! This is really cute and I totally enjoyed reading this.
Thanks for this entry and good luck in my contest.
Gaylene
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