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Baby, I love you...

I'll look into your crisp brown eyes again
Hoping to see all that I’ve ever wanted
Revealed in a passing glance of notice

All’s I want baby is a glance
To prove you know I’m alive
One little glance to reassure my soul
That this world isn't hollow or lost
That a spark of that thing called love still exists
In the midst of hate and anger

I'll look at the back of your head
And trace my memories in the curl of your hair
And I’ll wish that, that was my arms around you now

All I want baby is a glance
To prove you know I’m alive
One little glance to set this heart a flutter
With the hope that you'll notice me
Tomorrow when the world ends
Yeah baby, tomorrow when it all ends.

And time will continues its track
Forgetting about all the broke hearts
And the souls left behind to be trampled
When the world starts over again
Unrequited love just a memory
Cause’ you and me baby, we are going to die
With this love in our hearts
This bit of hope that the world will steal

Cause’ baby all I want is a glance
To prove you know I exist
To prove that all this pain was worth it
To prove that even the darkest can find a flicker of light
Baby, it's all going to end soon
And I just want you to know I love you...

Author notes

There is a certain person, who shall remain nameless.. who has no clue what she does to me everytime I see her... see her cry, her laugh, her smile... How I wish I could open my heart to her... and save her from herself... And remind her that their is always hope. And i'll always be there for her, everytime... just like always.

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  • IAmAlreadyGone
    June 17, 2007

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    this poem could well be made into a song.. its a pleasant read mm i may not agree with u when u say that love "stinks".. it can hurt mighty, alright.. but it IS the purest and most most beautiful of all feelings, i feel. well, keep it up!


  • AddictiveTRUTH
    June 16, 2007

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    Deep Emotions

    Written very well on this dear Poet. Love is a stinker sometimes, but we have to try and look beyond our circustances and allow true Love to surface.
    You've done well in this and I wish you all the Luck.
    Ephiphany


  • DancingShadowCorpse
    June 8, 2007

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    ummm.. I hope the world doesnt end tomorrow.. I want to see my baby atleast one more time before that happens...

    This is a moving piece, with apparent emotions conveyed beautifully. Good write!

  • wonder-why-gal
    June 6, 2007

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    wow this poem is very moving, especially for me because i know exactly what it's like to be in this situation. keep it up!

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