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The Elf From Tipparary

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A young elf from fair Tipparary,
Had one that was long and quite hairy,
I'll tickle you pink
He said with a wink
To Catkin the contrary fairy.

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  • darkknight marellus
    March 2, 2007
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    Quite well done. Short and sweet, and a twist of pervertedness that is always good. Great job and congrats on winning silver. Geezalou, you have a lot of great poems, if your trophies mean anything!

    Take care
    Akasha


  • Sonja
    March 1, 2007
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    Congratulation Di


  • ShelleyA gold member
    March 1, 2007

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    Hi Di. A delightfully risque limerick. Congratulations on winning Silver. Well deserved dear friend. Take care. Shelley


  • you make me smile
    March 1, 2007
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    Congrats on the trophy!!
    Different but got me laughing. Nice write with good flowing rhymes.


  • Elrenia
    March 1, 2007

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    Very nicely penned. This hit the spot. The rhythm was rhyme were both smooth. And, it was naughty enough. Congratulations on the placing.

    Thank you for sharing.

    rous


  • ZorroTheFox silver member
    February 28, 2007

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    that was cute and put a smile on my face. I've been in a limerick mood all month so this fit in well for me.


  • Wandika gold member
    February 28, 2007
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    Funny!

    He could then tickle her fancy, so to speak!


  • Tirrell
    February 28, 2007
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    Very cute reminds me of the old limericks.
    I love the imagry as well my friend perfect poem!


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    February 28, 2007

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    ohhhhhhhhhh....so cute! Loved this one! Lovely imagery and rhymes. That is one unique name for a fair you got, Sis! Wonderful assonance in this limerick.

    All the best,
    Charishma

  • ShelleyA gold member
    February 28, 2007

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    This made me laugh. Very good write and presentation. Quite naughty. Very nice rhythm and paints quite a funny picture with your words. Well done!


  • Shadow Keeper
    February 28, 2007

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    Hey, cool poem you have here! I liked the picture and the flow of the poem was great. Awesome poem, and humourous also! Nice job with this, I enjoyed reading it!


  • MuddyKing
    February 28, 2007

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    tried to sneak a Katkin by me...lol
    Simon sez...he's jealous

    brilliant Di
    Peace and hugs
    Muddy


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    February 28, 2007

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    Really delightful. Very funny also. Thank you for your entry and good luck in my contest.
    Gaylene


  • Spiritual Nature
    February 28, 2007
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    Quite delightful. Well done and very humorous.

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