Her magic is most bewitching.
She just sends me heart a twitching.
On me her spell--
Is it Heav'n or Hell
For I spend me days NOW itching!
Happy St. Patty's Day!
Author notes
FORM: Acrostic http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/acrostic.html
A contest entry
- Limericks #4 by AliceinPoetryLand.
300 points, ended February 28, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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What a cutie.
The limerick is delightful and the picture of the doggie is just wonderful. I have a small dog too and found this piece very delightfu. -
An Irish mood
Whimsy and rhyme that waggy tale you chimed.
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haha, too true; My parents and sister all have Westies with excema.
Looking for me shamrock emoticon here... -
This is a cute piece as is he/she. Very humorous.~Suseann
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Oh, I love Limericks, and this one is so entertaining and witty!
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tee hee... this is totally cute as can be! The picture is adorable! Love the way you wrote this... Irish charm!
~Melissa
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Hahahahhaahahahhaa!! You always make my day, sweet Sis! How are you? I look at flowers and think of YOU. Love ya! Enjoyed this limerick. Lovely rhymes and imagery! This reminds me of the show - BEWITCHED on Star Plus!
All the best,
Charishma -
Thanks for the chuckle!
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Aww this is cute. I really enjoyed the read. Thanks for entering and good luck!
Last line 'send' I think should be 'spend'?
Gaylene
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Thank you so much for the Honorable Mention. ♥
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A very fun read. Good presentation. Imaginative. Good rhyme. Good word choice. Nice rhythm. A well crafted limerick.
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loved this, very cute picture! All the best in the contest; this made me giggle!
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I thinks me chuckle at your limerick. Very cute.
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