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Kiss chasey

 

 

There was a young lady called stacey

whose petticoat was ... oh so lacey

she showed the boys

played with them like toys

kiss them, then ran away yelling "It's kiss chasey"

 

 

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  • Dusty Rose
    March 2, 2007
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    So cute and sweet sis..I love this new name for the game kiss and chase....

    Love your sis...Dusty


    • The Poetic Angel
      March 2, 2007
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      fanx me sis ... i had change name to fit the poem lmao ....... cheeky sis xxxxxxxxxxxx


  • tawk gold member
    February 28, 2007
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    Such a cute write I so loved it. You made me laugh!!!!


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    February 28, 2007

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    This is so innocent and cute!! Kiss Chasey, a new game! Well done. Good luck in the contest.

    Jeannie


  • slipperssun gold member
    February 28, 2007

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    lol what a cute little limmerick... well done... i love the wayt hese come out. well done one a fantastic write


  • crystalclear1000
    February 28, 2007

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    great, i love this is is oh so sweet. Is this a limerick, because I would like to learn how to write this.


  • Musimwa
    February 28, 2007
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    It is good

    OH u are so creative dear friend and poet. I love the u play with the rthyme. Keep this up


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    February 28, 2007

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    Lol...so cute! Lovely imagery and good rhymes. Nice flow to this limerick. Wonderful alliteration. Oh, in L2, shouldn't it be "whose petticoat" and not 'who petticoat'?

    All the best,
    Charishma


  • DJ Harley silver member
    February 28, 2007

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    very cute limerick, cheeky
    she better run they will catch her for that kiss and more.
    good luck int he contest
    Master


  • Blankscreen2222
    February 28, 2007

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    HAHAHAHA!!!! you are very good at doing limericks Cheeky.
    V. Clever. Really made me laugh.
    Best of luck in the contest


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    February 28, 2007

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    Lol very nice. I enjoyed this one. Thank you for your entry and good luck in my contest.
    Gaylene

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