there was an old man with ease
who made us smile as cheese
who thought his head so big
we thought it full of pig
he left us to be with peace
A contest entry
- Limericks #4 by AliceinPoetryLand.
300 points, ended February 28, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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a rather strange but fun write that made me smile
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Oh....the twist in L5 was unexpected! Nice rhymes and imagery in the limerick. Good alliteration.
Goodluck,
Char
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Thank you for your entry. A fine effort. Even thought Limericks can be humourous they also need to make sense. Some of this I found a little difficult to understand.
Gaylene
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