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Apostle of Peace


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When I am  in wilderness
You come with hand full of ideas
That calm me in calories
and stand  valiant ahead of me

When I move in crowds
You stand aside lonely
Winking at  me loosing all proteins
and discourage me in all stances



I am to still to learn more
about the nutritional facts of love
to keep me abreast of  updated health tips

As long as my thoughts are not dilapidated
i don't look at you as a mirror of my hopes

As long as my opinions are not flabby and feeble
I desire to glance you as a fortune teller
with apt future predictions
and  due apologitic  in present columns



Light and dark shades make the sky  romantic
Delight  and  defiance  make the life aromatic
Waves and weaves make the sea ascetic
Words and phrases make the love poetic
making me illustratively yours forever
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  • Cupcrazy gold member
    February 28, 2007

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    A very nice piece, the metaphor is well crafted with excellent rhythm and flow. Thank you for this fine entry Bunny