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Breakdown

Im breaking down
Slowly falling apart
Despair fills my mind and soul
And slows my beating heart
It takes away my breath
And squeezes at my life
Taking away everything I am
Taking away everything
Except one simple knife

Everyone tells me to be strong
So I shed secret tears
I hate it when they know
That I’m succumbing to my fears
I don’t want to burden them
I don’t want to take up their time
They have problems of their own
Without hearing mine

And Im left to ponder alone
Sitting in the rain
If I had kissed you that day
Would everything still be the same?
Would we still be friends?
Or would we never talk
Would we see each other differently?
Or extinguish a non-existent spark

Through this darkness of mind
I don’t know if I’ll make it through
I’m confused
I don’t know what to do
I don’t know if I’ll make it through
I don’t know if I’ll make it through
I don’t know if I’ll make it through

I don’t know what to do


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  • ericalachea
    March 2, 2007

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    i absolutely love this poem! so much emotion and hurt is packed into this one. as i have stated before you have and amazing talent! hope things get better for you.
    ~erica~


  • CazzieJade
    March 1, 2007

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    You'll make it through. And we may have our own problems but you can talk to us anytime. You of all people should know that.
    I love it. Even though it's really sad.