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[ i struggle to get out of bed ]

i struggle to get out of bed
and there she is just standing there
talking of the day ahead
and great times that we can share

and although i feel dull and blue
and want to turn back to my room
she knows just what i need to do
and pulls me out of my undug tomb

she takes me out to eat some lunch
and we sit and talk about nothing much
but this small action changes my day
just pulling me out from where i lay

you may see her as just a girl
but to me she make a difference to my world

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  • JustAnotherIdoit
    November 23, 2007
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    i liked it a lot.


  • Sweetangelgrace
    February 28, 2007

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    Absolutely awesome!! I love this Poem..it warmed my heart. I can feel the truth and sincerity!!
    I will definitely look for more of yours and good luck in my contest!

    ~~GRACE~~