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A Rabbit feeding in the grass

Brown on green
near unseen
a twitching fear
elil near
silflay done
rabbit run
frith on high
quick and spry
pass blindly by
don't wonder why
rabbit run
warren deep
burrough keep
safe asleep
hombdil creep
rabbit run

Author notes

A cookie to whomever can name the language i peppered this poem with, and from what book.

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  • Era Umbra
    April 12, 2007
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    Awesomes

    intrestingly odd like the Box poem! I like it.