From castles of despair
to Mother Nature's whim of famine,
they were oppressed.
The torment of persecution
have made hearts flame
flicker and waver.
Trampled under the marching feet
of tyranny's affliction,
they never surrendered.
With durability of determination
and a hunger for deliverance,
every generation...
shall blaze a path
perpetuating chronicles
to reunification.
The flame to freedom
is eternally abiding.
A contest entry
- 20 Lines or Less - Any Form - Amaze Me! by Cupcrazy.
450 points, ended February 28, 2007, 19 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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very well written, i liekd it. kepe up the great work XoXoX
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This is just stunning, I loved everything about it. The thoughts, the rhythm and flow. Thank you so very much for penning me such a wonderful piece.
Bunny
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Superb
Ohhhh sis --this is an absolute winner! I love everything about it from start to finish, and you have worded it beautifully. I must say this is truly outstanding and a piece that you should be very proud of. Superb. Hats off to ya sis! Well done.
Love ya
Shaz xx
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That's a great Poem! I love it! =)
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butiful mum i love castles ...good luck in the contest ...cheeky
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Wicked
This was great Mum xxx, I flows realy well I hope you get a place in this wonderful contest, I love you xxx ~Gem~
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you have brought life to this picture..you imagery is amazing and spills out passion very well wrote this poem is utterly amazing no doubt this will win a trophy xxxxxxxxxxx
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