curious
a butterfly swoons through
the sky on fluttering wings
sending a message adieu
curious
how night always transitions to
the darkest and the coldest
before morning dew
curious
that love remains true
against separations
keeping anew
curious
our passion still yet grew
when fate split us in vain
my heart still for you
curious
must life go on through
when even separated
love deceived us adieu
A contest entry
- Butterfly Lovers by crimson rose 247.
600 points, ended February 28, 2007, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i love the refrain, the repetition, and the simple innocent lines to it, and how you end as you began with an adieu, in the first and last stanza, this is very memorable and beautiful, capturing a truth behind all,
thank you and good luc
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