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Puppetshow of life

Society is a puppeteer

It plays everyone

Controls what they do and say

I see it happen everyday

People follow one person

Trying to be "in"

What they don't know

Is that person is just society's custom puppet

Made from the fabric that is declared "normal"

They attach strings to themselves

Become just another marinet

Adding to the puppet show of life

I sit back and watch

Sometimes encouraging

Sometimes criticizing

The only fee to watch is to be deemed wierd

Abnormal,strange

A small price to pay for the freedom

To leave the show at one's on will

And not have to play along

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neice

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    April 7, 2007
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    marionette
    weird
    to leave the show at one's own will

    those are your few typos. This is very well written, and I totally agree with your viewpoint. Thank you for entering the contest. whisper

  • OurxBeginning
    March 31, 2007

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    This is a very true write and it's quite sad. The emotion in this is very evident. I liked the ending to this. Let me know what you'd like to be in my family though, please. Thank you for entering and good luck. ~~


  • Luna-
    March 28, 2007
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    I call them sheep.xD But puppets work too. I like this poem for I think the same way sometimes. You did an excelent job on it.

    Good luck and Good Job,
    Luna.