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Indecision.

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REUTERS/Claro Cortes IV (CHINA)


Indecision vaporised security.
Beauty circles ethereal density,
disintegrates boundaries.
Voices bounce within
freedom uncertainty.
Cottony dreams,
bridge the gap,
reach reality.

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  • less than a poet
    February 28, 2007

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    ok 1st of all the pic is awesome wow truly and ur poem is short but deep i loved d way u talked bout dreams and reality truly amazin , sry i havent read any of ur work but i dnt know what;s wrong w my AP and my conn they r both playing me

  • ea silver member
    February 27, 2007

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    I liked how you talked about beauty being able to disintegrate boundaries and saw this poem as being an upbeat take on this photo in that you saw how dreams could be bridged to reality in it somehow. Thank you for this entry (and I would ask that you please credit the photographer when you get a chance.)


    • Starswhispers silver member
      February 28, 2007

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      Thank you so much for your comment, I have added the credit under the picture,I wanted to add that most of lines in the poem are a reference to China history, and its political situation. Thanks for hosting this contest the picture is truly amazing.