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It's all about a dream I know,
It's all about freedom I don't own.
It doesn't matter if I'm right,
It doesn't matter if this sounds cool.
I'll always know everybody else is fooled.
I want to cross that line,
of insanity.
Just to know how it felt to be you,
Just to know how it felt to be me.
Fuck it all and all humanity.

L.

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Written June 24th, 2003

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  • Kegger
    January 2, 2004
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    Wow its brillant...I like the way it flows. Insainty is a place inside our own head..Or at least thats my viewing of it . Thank you for your comment on my work Hope this year's better for ya. Take care

    Kinjal *


  • Decrescendo
    June 24, 2003
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    Hehe great....I loved this. You really want to cross the line to insanity? Hehe if you're not allready there then i doubt it's a place you want to be. Great poem anyway. I really enjoyed reading it.

    ~Dreamer


  • film noir
    June 24, 2003
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    You don't want to know insanity, but i can introduce her to you.LOL great write, emotions, and flow. i think that im going to read some poems by you.