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Strip Poker Poem 1

A challenge you had set
For me and you to play
You'd not tell me what
It was for, but you
Told me come home for
A major fun night

Surprised that candles
Were not lit and dinner
Was not ready, I simply
Turned around and thought
What do you have up your
Tricky little sleeve

I hear your voice calling
Telling me to get my butt
In the dinning room now
To my shock, you had a
Deck of cards out and said
Sit down, it's time to play

Wondering what in the world
I sat down and just smirked
You had never beaten me at
Cards, why would you want to
Play now, when you know you
Would lose once again to me

Author notes

Strip Poker Poem 1. I thought I'd do it in installments because I find that really long poems are not cool.

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  • Maddogk
    March 15, 2007
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    Ka

    Installment no. one sounds pretty good so far....
    Can't wait to read them all...

    Jeffro


  • Welcome-To-Hell
    February 28, 2007

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    Oh this is a wonderful first installment of what I have a feeling will be a wondeful series of poems I cant wait to read the rest
    Bravo


  • slipperssun gold member
    February 27, 2007

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    cool... i look forward to part two then... dont ya just love a cheeky partner... always something up their sleeves
    awesome write though on a great fun subject


    • SensualWhispers
      February 27, 2007
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      Jen

      Absolutely. hehehe It's going to be like 5 parts. I didn't want it to be a story, so I made it a 5 part strip poem hehehe