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A Moment of Grandeur!

                Twilight unfolds
              in rapturous ecstasy.
            At the glimpse of maidens
          frolicking in bare innocence
          after a fragrant spring rain.







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  • requiempoet gold member
    March 7, 2007

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    This is beautiful!!! I love it! I aboslutely LOVE the first rain! I think it's beautiful and I ALWAYS run in it! but usually with some sort of clothing on!!


  • HerbalGoat
    March 7, 2007

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    Beautifully written, dear poet. The only thing I spotted wrong, or that I didn't like, is L4:

    "innocents" is spelled 'innocence'

  • meena krish
    February 28, 2007

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    Now I like the picture here! So warm and carefree and at the same time it gives a spring time happiness..enjoyed this read. Good luck in the contest..take care.