I am done hunting
looking for my
father
oh, where is he?
I hear a
low growl
Is it hunter?
Or is it prey?
I steal forward,
quickly, yet silently
and see a sickening
sight before
me
Behold, a monstrous
bear, ready to
attack
I have seen these
emotions before...
but only when I
hunt my prey
Could my
father be
around?
Or my
brother,
Edward?
I hear a yell
but not of
frustration or of
rage
which is
what I
usually hear
But this is of
something new...
something like...
terror
Like the feeling of
my prey
I see someone
new, a
human
He is unlike
anyone I have
ever seen before
He has brown hair,
with emphasized
muscles....
why do I think
these things?
He is human!
The bear is
ready to attack
this...
this...
human
without thinking,
I turn to the
bear and
growl and
attack,
careful not
to get too
close to
the human.
Later, I
tell the human
the bear will
not bother him
anymore.
He is amazed,
amost
insultingly
but I
realize that
I reavealed
my secret - that
I am a vampire
So, I pick the human
up and
carry him in my arms
and run
he falls unconcious
from shock
I run faster
to Carlisle
I tell Carlisle
my story
and ask
him to change
the human
into one of
us
Carlisle
refuses
but I am
persistent
We argue
Later, I
have won
Carlisle takes
the human and brings
him to my room
the human is still
unconcious,
lying in Carlisle's
arms
looking like an angel.....
for an human, anyway
Edward, Esme
and I leave
the room
There is too much blood
Hours pass, and I hear screams
and yells
of agony
"Let me
die! Why
am I not
dying? I want
to die!"
I want to
comfort the
human, but I
know I can't
Two and a half
days later, the
yelling and screaming
subsides
Carlisle says the
transformation
is complete
Carlisle brings
the once-human
into the room
Carlisle has
talked with
the once-human
and tells us his
name is
Emmett
What a beautiful
name,
Emmett
For a beautiful
person,
Emmett
I stare at
him and
he stares
at me
and we
know we
were meant
for one
another.
Author notes
Rosalie's POV
Option 2.
Beneath the Willow
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you'll be added to the finalist when you add the stuff in your authors notes
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uhm i still love it i just noticed something i didnt notice last time. 1) when rosalie tells part of emmett's story she says that he was almost dead and bleeding a lot when she found him. thats why carlisle agreed to change him. 2) when emmett tells the story, he says that rosalie was right there saying it was going to be ok the whole time. thats where his quote came from "Hell isn't so bad it you keep an angel with you." but i still loved the poem.
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wow long. BUT I TOTALY LOVED IT! I LOVE TWILIGHT! keep it up!!!!!
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Yeah... its Rosalie's.... I better go put that on author's notes.....
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gosh, i really want to know whose point of view this is. rosalie's perhaps? I pick that up from the connection she/he feels with emmett. great write. i love love love love love twilight and new moon
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Oh, this was really good.
good job.
peace♥riley---
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sweet and simple. It's a good perspective to look at. It's different. Keep up the great work.
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Thanks, guys.
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