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*How do you feel?*

How do you feel when you see me?
Do you feel warmth and happiness?
Like I feel for you ever since the day
The day you went away life hasn’t been the same
In a very painful way
Whenever I hear your name
My heart begins to pound and throb
I know that you have moved on
Yet I sill find a place in y heart to love you
But us are no longer so hopefully
I will find someone
Somebody that feels the same way!

Please tell me what you think

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  • katiekills4
    February 27, 2007
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    Wow this is amazing i dont find anything wrong with it