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My Love Holding Against to You

To my dearest sweetheart,

It has been so long since I have seen your delicate face, embracing every moment, and cherishing every second of you close by. How you said to me, that when I look into your eyes you will find me, and when I look into your heart I will find you. It made me feel warmth inside and finding the reason to live.

How your charms make me blush wildly, with a few soft smiles on my face, and how your kisses gives me great joy and pleasure, of wanting more than just being in a relationship.

Sometimes when I get the chance of saying I love you, it’s a hard phrase to say it, but with you, you make it much easier for me to say it, as though if my heart had a face, it would be smiling right now towards you.

Oh my love…how each time my heart beats to the rhythm of yours, it will remind me that in this place, there will be only you and into wanting to be with you everyday in every beat, and this will remain to be my special moment in my heart into being with you. I love you.

With best regards and wishes…

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This letter was for a competition but it closed before I get my chance into entering, which is sad.

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  • Souless Poet
    March 4, 2007

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    "Sometimes when I get the chance of saying I love you, it’s a hard phrase to say it, but with you, you make it much easier for me to say it, as though if my heart had a face, it would be smiling right now towards you. "

    Wow this is exactly how i've felt about someone for a long time. Strange how it hits the nail right on the head. I love those lines and the raw emotion with them.

    how about a moment where you two were once together and describing how that moment now fades into the present and how that makes you feel. Perhaps visiting a place now and remaniscing about how it was when you were there together.


  • Davitude
    March 3, 2007

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    This poem showed sweeeet emotion and i say it all the time but jane i wish i could write like you


    • Calamity Soul
      March 3, 2007
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      Dave, this isn't a poem. It's a love letter.

      Haha, thanks for your time in reading and commenting this piece.


  • tatteredweave
    March 2, 2007
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    Dreamy ..

    "as though if my heart had a face, it would be smiling right now towards you. "

    this is so sweet ...

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