What do you see when you look at me?
A young girl smileing all full with glee?
You're sadly mistaken,
I'm in desguise,
the girl you are looking at,
her face isn't mine.
I've just realized now my life is a lie.
Sliting my wrists,
not doing I try.
Sometimes my depression makes me want to die.
You don't understand me,
you'll never know,
not telling the truth is my new kind of low.
This darkside has been the hidden me,
just because I'm like this,
doesn't meen you should be.
A contest entry
- Make Me Feel Dark by Xsafety glassX.
375 points, ended April 29, 2007, 59 entries
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Comments
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amazing i kno this feeling and i have been there
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this was a very truthful and honest poem and must have been very hard for you to write about..I can relate to this poem all to well and understand the pain that you wrote about..I hope everything works out for you and please read the group message I just sent out to everyone
keep writting your very talented hun
~Chrissy~ -
YES!! FINALLY AN EMO POEM!!! thanx for entering my contest...this wuz a great poem...short and sweet...and deadly...wow...great work!!
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~smile and b happy~
cheer up, depression isnt ur whole life. if u wanna hear sumthin that makes u happy hear this, u cheer me up each day cause ur just such an awesome friend and u should know that, sure ur crazy at times but thats wat makes u my friend. ne1 would b lucky 2 hav u as a friend.
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