Inhale.
Exhale.
it's all gonna be okay.
forget the demons
hiding in the darkness
stare out your window
count the stars, make a wish
pray to God
they say he's always listening
Inhale. Exhale.
It's gonna be okay.
white light
cold floors
someone you know
too young to understand what's happening here
but you know you don't like it
no blood
no pain
just a feeling that makes you sick
pushing
now you're crying
no this isn't a dream
close your eyes
say a pray
and breathe...
Inhale. Exhale.
It's gonna be okay.
You will make it.
One, two, three
breathe
it's gonna be okay.
sticks and scars
no reason for most
she locks you up
makes you stand for hours
your legs are sore
if you cry she beats you
sticks and stones may
break your bones
but
don't let her words hurt you
Inhale. Exhale.
It's gonna be okay.
You will make it.
I swear.
Pray to God
they say he's always listening.
forget the demons hiding
in the darkness
stare out your window
and count the stars
Author notes
very personal.
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Comments
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Wow..... Oh Kaleidy!!!!!!!!! I'm sorry is this happened to you or someone you know! It makes me wanna cry!
Wow!!! I'm likke....speechlessly heartbroken. I'm so sorry!!!!
Akasha
s!!!!!!
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Wow...never give up
These kinds of situations are always hard. Never give up. Keep on living and praying things will get better. It's always good to have someone or someway to talk about things. Poetry is a great way to let your feelings be free.
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oowww.. this is too sad.. i love the whole piece, didnt realize wut its all abt at 1st.. this is a gr8 way to put such situation into words, nd yea it is filled with hope..
"forget the demons hiding
in the darkness
stare out your window
and count the stars "
gr8 job sweets.. hope this person gets better ..
me
xxx
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Nice
This poem was well-written. It's dark, but it seems a little hopeful. Nice job : )
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