A friend I thought I was of yours
Someone whom you could rely on.
I have been your confident,
a companion of many years.
Is this how it comes to be?
Am I now simply an evanescence,
Something in the background?
A fuzzy faded old photo?
Or perhaps a simple blur of vision?
You have replaced me with someone new.
A shiny penny?
Is this why you tell him more?
A new confidant, a new friend.
Am I obsolete?
I cheered you whence you were blue
Why am I replaced for something new?
Remember I am always here for you...
Please tell me what you think
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I ahlf expected this to rhyme from the start and thought it was very effective when you did coz it summarises the point with a bang! I don't know who you are tlaking about but aww, I still love you!
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interesting topic,writtin well -
aww poor gina. friendships change as people do- but like your poem looks at, it doesnt stop it hurting. i like the sense you've explored that this is how its turned out- 'how it comes to be', when you're getting on with someone you dont expect it to go wrong and it leaves you struggling to understand
great write
(hug)
E~
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lovely, very personal
I think I understand what this poem is about.
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Are you sure? lol ¬_¬
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Yes of course he does... because he's psychologist bloke... ¬_¬ with a knack of interfering in other people's lives....
Like all professionals ^_^
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Very well written poem...
"Something in the background?
A fuzzy faded old photo?
Or perhaps a simple blur of vision?
You have replaced me with someone new."
Sounds so familiar...lol...^_^
Well perhaps it fits me more....I'm more of a pessimist....and am inadequet at life....lol...
^_^ so hun I wouldn't worry about it...
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Awwwww! Whats up did something happen?
Am I allowed to know what made you feel this way or is it better that I don't know?
Anyways,
I like the poem it is full of Emotion and deep feelings, I hope ya get these feelings ofyour chest soon....
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